Erotic Poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Hippievixen, May 13, 2005.

  1. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    on the balcony
    naked, defiant,
    enjoying Davinci-brand
    Tuscan chianti,
    wind blowing,
    chimes singing
    in the breeze
    and the sunset
    in your eyes.

    before you
    can even finish
    your plate of
    tortellini and tilapia,
    i have spread a blanket
    of stars and moons
    on the floor,
    and drunkenly dragged
    a pillow from the couch
    to our little island.

    it is friday
    all week you have
    labored extensively
    so i can wear these
    cute Steve Madden
    stiletto heels
    dangling from
    my ankles.

    you swallow the rest quickly,
    asking me,
    "can i at least finish my dinner
    before we fuck?"
    your eyes twinkling as you
    wash it all down
    with the red, red wine
    and grab my hair,
    blonde, abbreviated,
    into your hands.

    i take you into
    my mouth
    tasting nothing
    but red wine
    and feeling nothing
    but pleasure
    as i scale your mountains
    and dive into your seas,
    brown as cinnamon
    and sweet as sugar.

    drunk
    and uninhibited
    i moan
    as you smack my ass
    repeatedly
    while i wrap my lips
    around you
    and bring you closer,
    closer still
    to the peak
    of ecstacy.

    you are mine
    and i am yours
    the crazy bitch
    with the wild blue eyes
    and flaxen hair
    who wants nothing more
    and nothing less
    than Tuscan wine
    and good times -
    outside!
     
  2. bedlam

    bedlam Senior Member

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    yeap l like it..
     
  3. BlackGuardXIII

    BlackGuardXIII fera festiva

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    And I like it too.

    It is a very visually descriptive, and personally touching, real, arousing work. It evokes images that I hold dear in my archives... of balconies, car seats, mountain tops, lakes, ocean shores, and secluded meadows.... I highly recommend the great outdoors as a setting for petting....
    HippieVixen, why didn't you paste a pic of your very sexy self to go with it? I had to use my imagination to picture that post from the undies thread.... luckily I have a good memory for some things.....
    A+, it definitely got a rise out of me..
     
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  5. Hippievixen

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    aww, thank ya'll...

    *hugz*
     
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