Inside great art

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by nicelytoasted, May 8, 2005.

  1. nicelytoasted

    nicelytoasted Member

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    tell me what u think :)

    blood on the window
    the curtains are torn

    smearing her death

    piercing her heart with a rose bush thorn

    he cares not for her tears

    or pleading soft heart

    he cares soley for her

    and the cut is his art

    her screams cut the silence

    of the death in his hands

    all he can hear

    is the applause from his fans

    wild with his fame

    he dances and bows

    inside great art

    his talent allows

     
  2. sparklesinthesky

    sparklesinthesky Member

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    wow im not sure i excatly understand but i think i like it?
    does that make sense? i hope so
     

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