lifes path

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mysti, May 1, 2005.

  1. mysti

    mysti Member

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    hello! idk what to write and i suck ne ways so i will just let the words spill...maybe they might come out nicely...what do you think? here goes...


    lifes path

    walking down the ever going path of life
    wondering if it ends here this night
    in a world filled with sorrow and fright
    you find it hard to hold might.
    the never ending night catches your tears and saves them for the day
    but will it come?
    are you the only one out there in his world of problems
    you come to ask yourself wich way to go when paths split
    the curves in llife are much harder when you are lonely i have come to learn
    i am all alone on this never ending path,
    i dont think my life will last...
     
  2. grimmo02

    grimmo02 Member

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    its actually not that bad....as for myself, i seem to have permanent writers block....:(
     

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