Society's Child

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Major Peacenik, Apr 29, 2005.

  1. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    Lift it.
    Let it live,
    Hurried and tired.
    Love it to death,
    Resigned to raise
    Society's child.

    Open the box.
    Taste what was ordered
    Before it runs away
    And begins a new life without you.
     
  2. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Hurried and tired.
    Love it to death,
    Resigned to raise
    Society's child.
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    Fav part, esecially those last two I posted.
    The two lines just didn't work for me as far as the flow goes. The rest is so clean lined...
     
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