This poem will blow your fucking mind

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Guff-POW, Apr 28, 2005.

  1. Guff-POW

    Guff-POW Member

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    As the synthetic mullet slowly rolls down the cosmic road of linear destiny in his tie died 1979 chevy camaro he thinks...

    am I all???
    am I nothing??
    Do I exist??
    Am I a hallucination??
    he's Inspiration...
    reason for masterbation
    he controls all nations
    he's the remote to change the channel
    but he's exudes from every station...
    he's education
    radiation
    until the cosmic road of linear destiny abruptly stops and the camaro explodes in a blue supernova...
    life suddenly begins as a journey
    and ends as a destination...


    woah... deep shit man
     
  2. happyhippy9797

    happyhippy9797 Member

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    Pretty good. I like it.
     
  3. joker

    joker Senior Member

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    U put a lot of feeling into. I like it. Right on bro.
     
  4. Spyder

    Spyder La dah de dah

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    thats not deep shit, thats just emotive words wrapped up in empty sentiment.
     
  5. Peace Attack

    Peace Attack Make War

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    It didn't blow my fucking mind but its was pretty cool.
     
  6. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    It sounds like you wrote it when you were high, so , far out! keep your strange thought coming!
     
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