"untitled" let yourself go for a minute.. create a world full of sweethearts and decorations.. not one god.. not one sad youve made yourself at home in a ghetto you're not afraid to show the world what your favorite colors are .. and you're not alone even though you're alone in your room and you're not afraid even though it's not ok.. you're wishing the best for a homeless man writing him a letter telling him you love him no, you don't know his name no, you don't know where he's been all you know is that he's walking down the street and you may never see him again .. isn't it a shame? let yourself go and imagine for a minute.. how many of you want to save the world? (..does anyone know how?) how many of you are asking yourself, "what am I going to do?" (..do you need any help?) ..by colt. hmm, its ok i think. its not done but i wanted responses.. hope you enjoyed it! peace everyone love and hope
Colt, I love your feelings that freely flow from you heart and soul. Please keep writing from your true inner being for that is where we truly find ourselves. Will be looking forward to hearing more of your wonderful words. Love and light being sent to you, From my heart to yours, Flying Feathers
Mmmmm, I'm with Flying Feathers!!!!! !!! Big GRIN!!!! Your words are BEAUTIFUL! ! Namaste Francine, Rainbow
thank you both so much. heh, gave me a shy smile to my face haha. a lot of my poems are just proof of how lost in the dark ive been. im on a slow revival though. one dya i'll make it out.. i hope.. any way, thank you again
I love ur words, not so difficult vocabs so I can understand And I see those are so beautiful and very sincere. I think i let myself go for more a munite. I've re-read it a few times. hehe ^^ Peace!
You Are So Young But So Smart!! What You Write Is What Many Of Us Are Afraid To Ask. You Have The Heart Of A Poet And A Soul Of A Lion. W/these 2 Things You Can Be The Best At Whatever Life Offers You! Untill I Looked At Your Age I Thought I Was Reading The Work Of A 50 Yr.old Man. Great Writting, Please Don't Stop. You Know You Are Truly A Writer Of Words When You Want Them Wanting More!!
