Poetry Defines the Edge of Sanity

yeah yeah, Edge is here, I'm 16, male and from Minnesota, US of A, been writing poetry for a lil' over a year, no training, so itz pretty raw emotion that I've taught myself.

Thought Of the Week: I was feeling pretty Godless when I was reading my bible 2 nights ago and I wrote this up (while listening to some Chrisitan grunge metal music, "Blindside" Whoo, yeah!) You can see the influence in this 3 min. spent thought.

Blink by Blink
I start to see
Was blind
But the Devil saved me
yet all he gave me
was sin to see
free from the dark or was I?

In the garden of Eden
The apple he showed
the first bite
to the wrong road
You can't believe what you see
But when ur blind u trust faithfully

blind me again
strike me till I obey
All I have was given from you
so take it all away

Blink by Blink
I start to see
Was blind
But the Devil saved me
yet all he gave me
was sin to see
free from the dark or was I?
was I passed on to another darkness
my soul feels the weights
make me blind...

-Edge

Believe me I write better than this like I said before RAW emotion. check out Blind Blue Eyes ta see. peace

 

um.... yea yea homie?

*whatever*

good poem though!