comic book

Discussion in 'Art' started by Major Peacenik, Apr 22, 2005.

  1. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    I recently was asked by this guy to draw the comic book he was writing a script for. The comic is a spinoff of the Marvel series The Ultimates. After about a week, I have the first page done.

    check it out at http://members5.clubphoto.com/annie980464

    I don't have any of the words in there, because the guy said he'd put them in later, but here's the script:

    (pages 1-3 take place in a cave in the middle of a desert. Burnt bodies of soldiers and melted weapons litter the ground.)

    PANEL 1: (A flashlight beam shines onto a body, which has been burnt to the bone.)

    PANEL 2: (Captain America looks down onto the body.) "How the --" (He is interrupted by a loud CRACK!)

    PANEL 3: (Captain America looks up.) "Who's there?"

    PANEL 4: (Two glowing spots are visible in the darkness. He hears a disembodied voice.) "Hello... Captain."

    PANEL 5: (An Arab man with electrical energy coming from his hands emerges from the darkness.) "I was waiting for more Americans."

    PANEL 6: (Close-up of Arab's face.) "I had no idea I would be so lucky that they would send me... the American."

    Well, there ya have it... hopefully I'll be posting the next pages as I finish them. Constructive crit is welcome. Thanks :)
     
  2. ryupower

    ryupower NO capcom included

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    It's a bit small...I can't see...:(
     
  3. Nathan11

    Nathan11 Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    I dig it.
    The arab man in the last panel looks a bit like Senior Jesus.
    :D
     
  4. Wonder Girl

    Wonder Girl rhapsody in pink

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    It wasn't loading when I tried it...
     
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