the girl who drown in her tears

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by misanthropic42o, Apr 6, 2005.

  1. misanthropic42o

    misanthropic42o Member

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    we thought she was for here to stay
    but this was one awful reched day
    i must tell you from the start
    so hear me now, this is the very first part;
    the sky was grey, a storm was a brew
    and this girl still couldn't tie a shoe
    she fumbled and lost,
    alone in the dark
    she wept and she wept
    until the next day did start
    and she cried soaking everything
    all of her faveourite toys
    until her throat started a cold
    from all of the noise
    she screamed and she cried
    until nothing came out
    she sighed and she sighed
    with mediocre, and doubt
    suddenly a gust of wind
    it did pick up
    this girls tears, had finally had enough
    she floated far, into the distance
    she tried and tried
    but her tears were so persistant
    drowning in her tears
    she wept it all away
    this girl drown in her tears
    on an ordinary day.
     
  2. browneydgrl

    browneydgrl Member

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    how very profound
     
  3. misanthropic42o

    misanthropic42o Member

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    why thank you :) i really appreciate it
     
  4. Guff-POW

    Guff-POW Member

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    coooooool

    i like it
     
  5. meduza

    meduza Member

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    very emotional i loved it:)
    Keep on writing!!!!!!!
     
  6. LivinNreflection

    LivinNreflection Member

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    I really liked it, I serioulsy alomst cried reading it. That was really good, I am amazed. Thank a lot for sharing it!
     
  7. Ruby

    Ruby Member

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    Such a beautiful poem. Thankyou for posting this, you're very talented :)
     

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