how cheesy is this?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by amber, Apr 20, 2005.

  1. amber

    amber Member

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    Okay, I hate it~ so I'm deleting it
     
  2. NRx

    NRx Member

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    I think it's beautiful and FAR from mediocre writing. I bet there is a good reason he has not talked to you for awhile. This is surely not the reason.
     
  3. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    mythological, nice work!
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Yeah, i liked it, great imagery.
     
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