Pls Help Me Finesh This Poem!!!!

Set the stage and
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tell the tale.
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send my mind down
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passions trail.
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to a hidden clearing
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on a moon lit night
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where lovers join and
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their souls ignite.
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on a bed of leafs
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they dance the dance
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and promise sweet nectar
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with every glance.
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they taste of each other
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in loves sweet nest
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then separately go to
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their places of rest
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i like it!

piece for piece
and cue for cue
nothing has ever
felt so true.

that's what i'd do at least.

 

then offer hands
skin so pure, tasted nothing.
like this before.
vision seeing,friut so ripe
upon the lovers stage
pasion ,could force fire
this will ignite...............


lovenpeace ffrom saff

 

i like that one

 

Set the stage,
and tell the tale,
send my mind
down passions trail.
To a hidden clearing
on a moon lite night
where lovers join
and souls ignite.
On a bed of leaves
they dance their dance
and promise sweet necter
with their every glance.
piece for piece
and cue for cue
nothing has ever
felt so true.
so I dance
with every hue
the steps with mind
and soul and you
we sprout our wings
just like the beads
of sweat that drip
to form our meads
the pixies watch
our dance of love
coupled with the dance
of leaves and stars above
that splash our backs
and fill our cracks
with magic's wax
BAN THE AXE!

 

wow!

 

A noble effort all! Folklore has friends here. I like that!

 

Wow thank you I love them all

 

I am not falling anymore
Honey, open heaven's door
Awaiting hours in the midnight nation
Rolling through love's changes-- our trials; our tribulations
Seething, scurrying, everlasting love
One heart can be a lion, while another, a dove

 

Damn! aside from the last 4 lines, that really sounds great!

 

finish it yourself, its the only way any of us will ever make good poets, and thats by working, and perservering!

 

man there are some real poets here. good work!