Death Worthy of Odysseus

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EternalHunter, Apr 14, 2005.

  1. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    You had gone to dreams,
    a basalt lover
    poisoned by the wood
    of bible stained power.
    No sly smiled sphinx
    could turn the stoney
    medusa to dust
    with a lapis laden stare.
    No wandering Adonis
    would court this
    lonely aphrodite when the
    wine spilled onto the
    softer lips of chance
    staining the slik pillows
    and teasing caresses
    into sticky honeyed stings.

    The fruit of the pomegranete
    is sweeter than the bitter
    green tang of olive
    plump in the sun,
    but it only tastes sweet
    to the tortured tongue
    not grown accustomed
    to that life.
    You had drifted to
    dreams and there were
    seven tears to turn back,
    but Persephone
    rode the black horse of
    twilight, the night-mare,
    behind your eyes and
    cloven hooves
    and silvered wings scarped
    to reveal beaten
    statues and veins
    all too beautiful to cause
    harm; I watch from a distance, as

    Psoiden tosses you gaily
    on his stormy seas,
    and you writhe, a fool
    into the Sirens' golden grasp,
    I laugh, for I
    was not Circe enough
    to seduce your
    poinsoned wood--
    no preserved in an eternal
    salty tomb, one
    mariner's song of bones
    that holds no great
    inphamy to the others.
     
  2. cheshire_butterfly

    cheshire_butterfly Member

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    wow amazing, i love the greek metaphoric theme....if i phrased that right
     
  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I agree with cheshire on this; it's amazing, and I love the mythic greek theme. That first stanza, especially, is stunning. You've such a great talent... keep em coming!

    love love love!
     
  4. EternalHunter

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    Thanks guys.
     
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