i am soft

(i am prone i am prone i am prone)
i'm just a mixed up girl
Who sometimes forgets
Not to play with knives
That she needs to eat
And needs to sleep
i'm just a little mixed up
So i often forget
That nudity isn't love
That i really can't play guitar
That i could have a future
If i only cared
Sometimes i forget
That i'm a mixed up girl
Sometimes i can't remember
Who to be today

 

this is great, *electrica*

love the personal intensity, how there's volumes that could be spoken between the lines... one of the best I've read from you, thanks for sharing it!

 

i love this part:

'i'm just a little mixed up
So i often forget
That nudity isn't love'

that was heavy.

 

i love it. fulmah's observation of "volumes between the lines" hit the nail right on the head.

 

you are soft, so be your own sculpter this time, don't let anyone mold you

 

p.s. tom, i am so fascinated by your signature

 

WOrd...Isn't it amazing how soft we are though... Wow...?

 

mmm liked this. esp this:

i'm just a little mixed up
So i often forget
That nudity isn't love
That i really can't play guitar

 

it's so simple and true and lovley, really beautiful

 

Agreeing with all, not much more to say except that you present a universal state of mind, but the way you go about it is very unique.

 

"who to be today" that is a great last line