okay so i was assigned to write "your feeling spanish and nostalgic about your childhood, and in your journal entry, you will talk about... what you were like as a child the games and toys you played with as a child what games you played at school or in the park how you and others behaved as children while playing" what do you guys think of this paragraph? where do i need to put accent marks, or fix things? would you guys add, re arrange, correct or move any sentences???? muchos gracis!! Cuando estoy pequeno, vive en un apartmento grande, porque mi madre esta un enfermara.Yo portago bien, y estoy obedeco, pero estoy consentido porque mis padres esta mas simpatico. Me siempre jugo con trenes, los bloques, y la pestola . Jugo con mis vecinos en domingo y sabado, porque sus padres tienes trabajas y sus ninos necessita vive con sus abuelos durante la semana. En la fin de semana nosotros nada en la playa, pero solo en la verano.Durante la invierno, nostros va al patio de recreo. Yo jugo con ninos y ellos pellearse mucho, pero estoy timido y ellos molestan mi. Nosotros juga con el carrusel, o el cajon de arena, o el sube y baga. Cuando estoy pequeno, come comida tiene mucho colores.
Apart from having lots of spelling and gramaticall mistakes, some sentences don't make any sense at all; I mean I dont know what you're trying to say!!
\wow really??? this sucks... maybe you want to write a new paragraph with the instructions i had?? lol, probably not but it would be really awesome if you could....
Hey dork, a majority of the verbs should be in the past-imperfect tense (was __-ing or used to ___.) -Ar verbs end in -aba, -abas, -aba, -abamos (with an accent over the 1st A), & -aban. -Er & -Ir verbs end in -ia, -ias, -ia, -iamos, & -ian (with an accent over the I in all conjugations). Ser, Ir, & Ver are irregular though. 1. estoy - era 2. vive - vivia 3. esta - estaba 4. portago - portagaba (whatever that means) 5. estoy obedeco - obedecia 6. estoy - estaba 7. esta - estaban (in 3rd person plural) 8. mas simpatico - mucho simpaticos (plural) 9. jugo - jugaba 10. tienes trabajas - 3rd person plural should be used when you're talking about Their parents. - Tenian que trabajar. 11. necessita vive - tenian que vivan 12. En la fin de semana - durante el fin de semana 13. nada - nadabamos 14 & 15. la - el (all seasons have a masculine article, except primavera) 16. va - ibamos (Ir is irregular in the imperfect tense) 17. jugo - jugaba 18. pellearse - se pelleaban 19. estoy - estaba 20. molestan - ellos me molestaban 21. juga - jugabamos 22. & 23. sube y baga - subia y bagaba 24. estoy - era
Look man the best thing you can do is guve it to me in english and i'll translate it into spanish. Just if you want; I don't care, no problem!!!
hey! i am spanish and i could undertand it! just use your brain (borgy)! i mean, that guy didn´t do it so bad spanish verbs are far mmore complicated than english verbs...
