Cracks in the sidewalk

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pixietreeleaf, Apr 6, 2005.

  1. pixietreeleaf

    pixietreeleaf Member

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    Wrote this in sf figured someone triping out there might understand

    Cracks in the side walk spill the earth flowing out of every stream washing away the city funk ground filled and covered with disease
    Let the children play in their parks barefoot
    Pour some happiness on the streets for those night time trippers
    Trees breath the smog filled air as I watch them ingest it into their dying souls
    Pixie 1996
     
  2. Applespark

    Applespark Ingredients:*Sugar*

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    I like the poem but the structure of it makes it hard to read
     
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