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Moon warm

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Applespark, Apr 3, 2005.

  1. Applespark

    Applespark Ingredients:*Sugar*

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    Timeless
    Feminine dream
    Moon warm
    I am
    For all your skin
    Obscured within
    Sacred smiles
    From scarlet lips
    Secrets
    In these fingertips
    Lids draw
    In deprivation
    Distinct desire
    I move
    In cryptic soma
     
    Applespark, Apr 3, 2005
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  3. Firebelle

    Firebelle Member

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    Mmm...delicious, Apple!
     
    Firebelle, Apr 5, 2005
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  5. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    bewitching...

    i loved it.
     
    Hippievixen, Apr 6, 2005
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  7. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I'm glad this got pulled back to the top... I read it the other day and didn't have time to comment, but I do now and this is perfect... it's a style many try to do but don't do very successfully, whereas this is vibrant on many levels... excellent work, thanks for sharing it! :)
     
    fulmah, Apr 6, 2005
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  9. Applespark

    Applespark Ingredients:*Sugar*

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    Thanks everyone...Does anyone have any comments on what they think it's about?
     
    Applespark, Apr 6, 2005
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  11. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    ...all depends where my mind is when I read it. I always love your writing and miss you posting in here as much as you used to. Thanks sweety~*
     
    gdhmomchild, Apr 7, 2005
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  13. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Beautiful, it have nice flow/rhythm. I don't know what it's about, but I get the feeling it's sexual in nature.
     
    TrippinBTM, Apr 7, 2005
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