Painting a picture so glorious. Writing a poem so smooth. Making love in the most careful way. When I woke up this morning you were the first thing on my mind. I’m wondering if you know I’m thinking of you. You got my heart, and yes I know everyday ain’t gonna shine. I know being in love isn’t like a movie screen. I just got this feeling I need to express. Cos’ there’s an angel here Showing me the path. I just painted this picture, wrote this poem, I just tried to tell you ’bout my love, in the most careful way.
The opening stanza of this one really caught my eye and mind. It always amazes me when a young person does so well in their second language. Thanks sweet one.
oh, thanks gdhmomchild...sooooo nice of you..i love languages!! i'm hoping this writing will improve my english a bit..i got so much to learn, luv
LOL, well, if you IM enough english speaking people we can teach you plenty of bad habits in english, along with my crappy typing...we should be able to corrupt yer english in no time!! hehe
Cassi, you're writing becomes more confident by the day. The theme resonates. The lines are subtly drawn and something light-shadow, reserved-and-effervescent moves within the words. So as it should be.
Thanks to all of ya!! Yes gdhmomchild, I know that my english doesn't have to improve by IM you..*lol* maybe it will end up getting worse, but we'll see how it goes first we don't take the sorrows yet Thanks again...læt's kiip ån tsjanging d wårld(let's keep cahnging the world, if you didn't understand the first thing i typed)
