the rain out side is singing taking away the pain suddnly im not alone as tears stream down my face the rain out side is singing taking away my thouts suddnly the world is there and im no longer falling the rain outside it wispers secrets to the wind it tells it that im not alone and thats a magic thing the rain outside is my protection the protection from myself the world is tragic but suddnly in not alone
i like the repetition you used. there are a few spelling errors but you may have dont that intentionally? anyways it doesnt matter, you write beautifully. this poem makes me think of rain as a medicine