Rain

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PeaceLuv Ntofu, Mar 26, 2005.

  1. PeaceLuv Ntofu

    PeaceLuv Ntofu Member

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    the rain out side is singing
    taking away the pain
    suddnly im not alone
    as tears stream down my face

    the rain out side is singing
    taking away my thouts
    suddnly the world is there
    and im no longer falling

    the rain outside
    it wispers
    secrets to the wind
    it tells it that im not alone
    and thats a magic thing

    the rain outside is my protection
    the protection from myself
    the world is tragic
    but
    suddnly in not alone
     
  2. kjhippielove88

    kjhippielove88 color + rhyme

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    i like the repetition you used. there are a few spelling errors but you may have dont that intentionally? anyways it doesnt matter, you write beautifully. this poem makes me think of rain as a medicine
     
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