As I Am

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LenaSilk, Nov 12, 2025.

  1. LenaSilk

    LenaSilk Nutted

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    Take me out to dance all night
    Take me where the moon is bright
    Take me on a oneway flight
    to nowhere or to Disneyland
    Just take me as I am

    Take me skating after school
    Take your time and play it cool
    Make exception be the rule
    Dress me up like Uncle Sam
    But take me as I am

    Take me sailing on a boat
    Parade me on a Christmas float
    Play me like a music note
    Play me any way you can
    Just take me as I am

    Take me to a petting zoo
    or on a jet ski built for two
    Tell a lie and make it true
    Wrap me up and paint me blue
    Give me what you can't undo
    then Take me in as part of you
    Just take me as I am
     
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  2. Beautiful Erica

    Beautiful Erica Members

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    One of the best drop
    Ending very creative
     
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  3. Ybcican

    Ybcican Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    Definitely a very deep heartfelt line…WOW!
    “Give me what you can't undo
    then Take me in as part of you”
     
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    Thank you Erica!
     
  5. LenaSilk

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    Thank you my friend! 'Give me what you can't undo' is defo my favorite line in this one.
     
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