Rhymes or Reason

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  1. Candy Gal

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    Looking forward to Thrustday's poem. xxx
     
  2. BJintheUK

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    Okay Candy Gal, your wish is my command. Here's today's little ditty.

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    Thursday today and a bit of a non-day
    did nothing this morning, as the day slid away
    shopping this afternoon for pet stuff that's all
    then back home in time to see darkness fall

    so now I'm sat here and bereft of ideas
    what can I write about, any suggestions?
    perhaps I should sit and watch TV some more as
    it might help me make better mental connections

    my fingers would fly around over the keys
    pounding out stories full of intrigue
    with plot and with characters growing like trees
    in a forest of tales and each one unique

    now to begin to pen my magnus opus
    my novel so great it will be a best seller
    all I need is a good basic premise
    some well dodgy actors and a plot that's real clever

    then plan it all out on a blackboard perhaps
    to see all the twists and turns of the tale
    until I've worked out that there are enough traps
    to catch out the unwary and make them all fail

    to guess the denouement before the last page
    that's surely the mark of perfect suspense
    a book that remains for years as you age
    a mystery that's deep and really intense

    some stories are famous all around the world
    but we don't really know why that should be the case
    there's some universal need for us to feel unsettled
    like horror films scare us, it's a fear we embrace

    we enjoy the vicarious pleasure and pain
    of the down-to-earth hero and the villain who's slain
    and the pretty young girl who the hero has saved
    from a fate worse than death by the villain enslaved

    so where do I start this great undertaking
    I guess I should start to write up the last chapter
    that way I'll know how the plot will be ending
    then write it for your imagination to capture

    and once my great work's been polished to a shine
    and sent to the printers for their final say
    it'll need a good title this story of mine
    to fly off of the bookshelves every day

    if I write any more here I'll have to start working
    on plot and on characters to make it all real
    it will have to jump up off the page not sit lurking
    and waiting for me to land a publishing deal

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    Friday tomorrow, another week crashes into the weekend (thud!) :)
     
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    Ooh a story with character's.
    That sounds good. X
     
  4. BJintheUK

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    I'll see if I can write a story in rhyme for you Candy Gal. In fact I already have one that I don't think I've posted up here yet. It's a bit rude, and it's only short, but after I've posted up today's poem I'll see about finding the rude poem to put up as well. Meanwhile, here's today's offering.

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    Friday afternoon the weekend approaches
    I remember the days when I was at work
    couldn't wait to get out of the stuffy old office
    and cease to be just one more downtrodden clerk

    mind you I wasn't really, not in my last job
    I programmed computers and made up reports
    for the faculty members at my own small desktop
    so they could show figures based on my support

    I worked with a few of the departments on campus
    but mainly the PGCE recruitment team
    and armed with my numbers from college admissions
    they toured many schools to sell them the dream

    the rather odd dream of becoming a teacher
    to pass on the knowledge they'd only just learned
    and be permanent scholars who turned into preachers
    spreading the gospel to all those concerned

    I noticed that mostly it was girls who applied
    I guess the boys wanted to leave education
    they wanted to enter their careers from outside
    and not be a spark for the next generation

    on the campus there was an imbalance of genders
    with girls two to one compared to the boys
    I sometimes wondered if the boys knew the status
    and went there to find themselves spoiled for choice

    but that was before the virus pandemic
    hit all the campuses right in the guts
    now no-one can go there and be academic
    instead they must study at home in a rut

    I hope that this year we get to the bottom
    and find a new method of stopping the spread
    even the brightest of students will fail to blossom
    while working alone to take it all in their heads

    and exams if there are any will be a sham
    who will be able to answer the questions
    with no interaction but through instagram
    I seriously worry they'll fail their inspections

    so in future graduates will become scarce
    and employers will have to employ different means
    to find out how each candidate compares
    and decide who to take on and who to demean

    and for those not accepted into a career
    what can they do next to get a good job
    stand by the roadside and advertise beer
    or look for the nearest bank they can rob

    opportunity's there but nobody knows
    the roads to success are not clearly defined
    the schools need to teach about profit and workflows
    so their graduating pupils won't get left behind

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    Now to see if I can find the rude rhyming story. Back in a tick!
     
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  5. BJintheUK

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    Sorry about this, but it turns out I've already posted up the rude rhyme I was looking for. It's on page 3 and is called 'Vidi Vici Veni!' which means 'I saw, I conquered, I came!' So I guess I'll have to try and write something else that has characters and plot. Give me a couple of days and I'll see what I can manage. Meanwhile, I'll continue to write up the daily ode, and will try to carry on till June 30th, as I have committed (on another forum) to writing a poem a day for the first half of the year.
     
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    No worries Frixday is day of love and fun. xxx
     
  7. BJintheUK

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    Saturday today. It rained, again! My garden's a water garden now, it doesn't have a water feature, it IS a water feature. Ah well, with luck the pigeons won't drown, or I put on my wellies to go and feed them for nothing. Anyway, here's the story of Katie and Rory.

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    Saturday today it's been raining again
    I heard it this morning on the window pane
    my garden now looks like a flooded storm drain
    I had to put on my wellies to put out the bird grain

    now I'm back indoors and thinking of stories
    perhaps one about Katie and her old man Rory
    they liked to go cycling on their weekends
    out on their tandem when they had loose ends

    they rode in the country they cycled to the town
    but lots of steep hills, they got Katie down
    she said to poor Rory 'go buy us a car!'
    he did as she asked and then said 'there you are!'

    then they both went out driving together each day
    for miles they drove both home and away
    but Rory wasn't the man he'd once been
    and he couldn't remember the places he'd seen

    so Katie navigated them hither and yon
    but even she wasn't sure which road they were on
    so they asked a policeman the saw at a corner
    but they parked on his foot, which was bang out of order

    the copper berated them soundly for ages
    then threatened to book them for squashing his toes
    he even told them he'd sue them for damages
    so Katie declared that he was her hero

    she gave him a smile and sat him right down
    then took off his shoes to rub his toes better
    she soothed him with words till he no longer frowned
    and after a while he looked a lot calmer

    then Rory and Katie asked him for directions
    to get to the shopping mall that they were seeking
    instead he offered against their objections
    to come in the car and prevent them despairing

    to guide them along all the myriad ways
    to get to their goal that was quite far away
    and true to his word they avoided delays
    and arrived at the shops without going astray

    so they thanked the policeman and bought him a coffee
    then did their day's shopping and headed off home
    they retraced the route, (Katie had made a copy!)
    and swore to themselves nevermore for to roam

    but instead buy themselves a brand new satnav
    to tell them the best route to take A to B
    it cut all their journey times to less than half
    of the time it had taken them previously

    so now Kate and Rory are happy to travel
    on the highways and byways of country and town
    they no longer sit as their poor lives unravel
    but enjoy their adventures and write them all down

    they're hoping to write up a book to help others
    to learn all the pleasures of gadding about
    it seems that they're good because they've received offers
    to publish their tome and get their thoughts out

    so here ends the tale of Katie and Rory
    a car happy couple who enjoy their lives
    they've still got the bike and I might tell the story
    one day of their journeys, they're all in the archives

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    Sunday tomorrow. Let's hope it lives up to its name! :)
     
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    I so look forward to your poems. xxx
     
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    Just a short one this evening and not very interesting. It's been cold and windy, and this afternoon it started raining AGAIN! So we just went round to the local shops to get some milk in and a few other things. Anyway, let's hope tomorrow brings better weather and more in the way of inspiration for my poems. I'm getting fed up with trying to describe the day I've just had. I need to break out of the straightjacket of the now, and think more about the abstract, so that I can do more stories like the one about Katie and Rory.

    Hmmm! I must ponder on this, and while I do so, please read today's little offering.

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    Sunday wasn't a fun day and not very sunny
    we went shopping for milk and something for tea
    it was cold it was windy, can't say it was funny
    but it was dry for a while and that made us happy

    the bags were all heavy carrying them back
    if I hadn't worn gloves my fingers would've froze
    and the weight didn't do any good for my back
    so I was very pleased when the front door was closed

    then into the living room, feet up on the pouffe
    cup of coffee in hand and two custard creams
    sit back, look out the window at the neighbour's roof
    they're having an extension and I noticed what seems

    like three old cannon poking out above the tiles
    it's rolls of roofing felt, but the way they're stacked
    makes them look like big guns when seen in profile
    let's just hope the coming high winds will leave them intact

    there's a storm coming tomorrow it's already on its way
    with rain on the wind and low temps too
    the weather won't be too bad during the day
    but by midnight there'll be a right hullabaloo

    the hard rain will come crashing onto the panes
    the wind will howl noisily down through the flue
    by then I'll be cursing 'Oh, no, not again!'
    but hoping on hope that it's just passing through

    by the next morning with luck it will have diminished
    swept on its way by the cold Winter wind
    let's hope with the new month it'll all be finished
    and we can look forward to Spring in our minds

    although there's another three months of this season
    they won't be long coming, it'll be a short wait
    so just hunker down, you have the best reason
    to stay indoors eating and staying up late

    when Spring rolls round get out of the closet
    all your best clothes for being outside
    then go for a walk, with gloves in your pocket
    it'll probably still be cold it can't be denied

    so as the old saying goes don't cast your clout
    the weather's too changeable even in May
    for wearing light clothes to go gamboling about
    for that you must wait for a warm Summer's day

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    See you next month! Oh, that's tomorrow, OK, well see you tomorrow then, eh? :)
     
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  10. BJintheUK

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    Monday and the First of February. Did you know that on Feb 12th the date will be a palindrome? It will be 12/02/2021. There! Bet you didn't know that did you, eh?

    Anyway, here's today's ditty.

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    Monday Monday, I can't say
    I'm fond of it really, I just don't like the day
    it's the first of the month and of this working week
    I don't know if it would normally be that way
    but it's bringing me down it is
    yes it is
    it's damp and it's gloomy and covered with cloud
    it's a weather depression there must be a cure
    perhaps a strong wind to rattle the sashes
    of the windows that look out to see the sad shroud

    I long for the summer when blue skies appear
    and the blossoms have grown to be fruit on the trees
    the lushness of nature that basks in its glory
    and warmed by the sun till the grass smells so sweet
    and the long strands that stand up they tickle my knees
    as I stroll through the meadow of life at its ease
    to follow the path of my fate as it shows
    the way to my destiny there in the distance
    I see it but only through logic's persistance

    it moves me cajoles me and bumps me along
    through the rough and the smooth till I learn of the rhythm
    that orders all things on this spinning great ball
    that hurtles through space and nurtures us all
    and the sun that sustains us and gives us all life
    is our curse and our saviour
    a double edged knife
    it warms us and helps to develop strong bones
    but it burns us it blinds and wrinkles our skin
    it helps make us grow yet can give us all cancer
    makes me feel like some fool cosmic chancer

    and the plants that it nourishes thrive in its presence
    but too much will kill them without rain as well
    for the secret of life is a balance of these things
    of heat and of cool and wet and of dry
    so we watch as the days of the seasons pass by
    and wait for the perfect time to take our pleasure
    but watching and waiting impart certain pressure
    to move or to look away losing our patience
    our focus on the little things get in the way
    of appreciating our world with its earth and its sky
    so take heed my friends and relax and enjoy
    the life that you have with what tools you employ
    to make your life better and easier too
    I'm not thinking of me now, but wish this for you

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    See you on the other side! Of the night that is, or better known as tomorrow. :)
     
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    Brilliant poems BJ. XXX
    You should do a book xxx
     
  12. BJintheUK

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    Candy Gal,

    When I've got enough written to fill a book then I might just do that. The problem then is finding a publisher who's prepared to publish and print it!
     
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    OOh I know a way. xx
    I will PM later. xxx
    I have a call to make. xx
     
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    The second today, and time to post up today's work, well one of them anyway. I've been busy today knocking out rhymes, or poems that is. They don't always rhyme like my entries here do, some of them are more blank verse.

    Anyway, here's today's musings.

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    Today's the second of the month
    so only twenty six more to go
    before the month will change again
    this year's not going very slow

    in fact it's simply racing by
    it seems like only yesterday
    I took this challenge
    to let words fly
    from my mind onto the page

    so now I'm letting my fingers work
    my thoughts escaping to the screen
    I'm not sure if my brain's engaged
    or even where those thoughts have been

    they could be out on horses riding
    galloping across the plain
    the rolling hills behind them shrinking
    still they thunder like a train

    they pick up ideas along the way
    as hooves well shod speed through the grass
    they fly like clods and divots spray
    the sort thrown up by a polo pass

    but polo is two games it seems
    one on horse and one in water
    so which one should I embrace
    the horsey drier or the wetter

    who knows perhaps I'll use them both
    to build a rhyme for my collection
    I'm sure they both must share some rules
    as well as names as a connection

    but do my thoughts stay on the pitch
    or do they wander through the stream
    of consciousness the like of which
    you my reader have rarely seen

    yes my ode tonight is brewing
    bubbling up through all the cells
    I just hope it's not my undoing
    plunging into deeper wells

    to scrape the thoughts from every barrel
    then to paste them up as one
    as though I've been inspired by several
    ideas, there it's almost done

    now just to pen a final verse
    that rhymes like all the others do
    a rousing finish well rehearsed
    so I can give it all to you

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    I wonder what tomorrow will bring? :)
     
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    Hello again.

    The poem below is one I started writing a while ago, but left off after only one and a half verses. I found it again yesterday morning, so I thought I'd have a go at writing the rest of it. Anyway, it's here below for your delectation and delight. I think I'll make it my poem for today rather than having to start another one, so just accept it as today's offering. It has a name by the way, it's called 'Home'. I was going to call it 'Island Life', because it's about our island, but decided that 'Home' was a better name, and shorter too. :)

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    Green grass tops the jutting brow
    of snow white chalky cliffs
    at their feet the rocky shoreline
    ever seems to shift
    waves churn up the pebbles
    and the other shapeless stones
    behind this wall's the place we live
    the place that we call home

    the grey green sea is all around
    it stops us from escaping
    yet gives us peace to build the homes
    and gardens that we're shaping
    the finite land within our shores
    is ours to plough and sow
    the fertile land around us
    where our seeds take root and grow

    we cultivate our land and then
    we fill the space with people
    then build our churches to give thanks
    each one with tower or steeple
    and wooden pews all cut from trees
    we've grown in native forests
    they may be hard and lightly scarred
    especially the arm rests

    but over time these hardy seats
    have given their support
    to countless souls in need of rest
    and guidance of a sort
    on how to make their way through life
    with dignity and poise
    a lesson that's not always taken on by little boys

    but little boys grow bigger
    and mature into the men
    who work with hands
    to shape the land
    to house and comfort them
    they take their wives
    and make new lives
    to keep the process going
    through generation to generation
    you can feel the life force flowing

    the land gives up its bounty
    only when it's fed its due
    it needs the time
    and quickened lime
    to help the process through
    by breaking down
    into the ground
    whatever we discard
    it's not an easy thing to do
    indeed it must be hard

    our land is here and always was
    when ice above was flowing
    across the northern lands for years
    it stopped all life from growing
    but came the thaw
    the ground then saw
    the sun that rose above it
    the plants awoke
    the warmth then spoke
    and life soon learned to love it

    the land grew rich and filled men's eyes
    with bounty overflowing
    so man moved in to claim his prize
    and set the cycle going
    and now with knowledge passed to us
    we keep the land alive
    and though the work's laborious
    it lets us live and thrive

    this land is everything to us
    it's where we live and breathe
    it's where we're born
    it's where we die
    and where our families grieve
    and though it's sad to say farewell
    to those who've gone before
    the circle of existence
    is what we live here for

    we want our family lives to be
    as joyful and serene
    as humans always strive to live
    it's how it's always been
    we want success to bathe us all
    and keep our futures bright
    and so we follow nature's call
    to do what she thinks right

    this land is hers where she holds sway
    we're only tenants here
    and if she chose to throw us off
    she'd make it very clear
    our time is past
    we'd be the last
    to till and plant the soil
    there'd be no more
    to struggle for
    so no more need to toil
    we'd be set free
    from all that we
    have ever known it's true
    and we'd belong to nowhere
    just footloose me and you

    but don't despair
    all you out there
    who've read this open letter
    as long as we
    can nourish her
    she'll make our country better
    and all of those
    whom fate has chosen
    to live on this land
    give thanks each day
    in every way
    for nature's helping hand

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    See you tomorrow! :)
     
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    Such wonder writing my lovely. xxx
     
  17. BJintheUK

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    Hello again.

    Today's Thursday, or as Candy Gal would have it Thrustday. Anyway don't wish the day away, but stick around and play or if you're jewish you might say 'Oi Vay!' Well be that as it may, it's time to post up the poem for today.

    So here it is.

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    There comes a time in each man's life
    to think of where he's been
    to think of all those whom he's loved
    and those no longer seen

    for time like water flowing through
    has faces for reflections
    just as a clock needs a hand or two
    as pointers for directions

    and where the hands point on the dial
    is where we find our conscience
    for there the markings all the while
    exist to give directions

    we live in four distinct dimensions
    or so we have been told
    where three of them are solid
    and the fourth is us as we grow old

    but what if there are others
    planes of thought we just discern
    as pieces of the whole we see
    the things that we all learn

    as life is thrown straight at us
    we cannot dodge away
    but must face up to what arrives
    at our front door each day

    the letterbox is overflowing
    with the post of others
    whose words to us they're showing
    wrapped in envelopes and covers

    magazines and marketing
    are what we see most of
    when reading what's been sent to us
    as though ordained from above

    rules and laws are pasted on our brains
    as though by right
    you'd think that without all their words
    we'd never see the light

    but though they cajole and pester us
    to join in all their schemes
    we still have our own memories
    of what our lives have been

    through lenses made of soft recall
    we look back on the past
    and try to never lose it all
    but instead make it fast

    fastened to our inner being
    nailed onto the mast
    a crowsnest made for seeing
    what our lives have been at last

    and as we sit with trepidation
    wondering what's next
    now's the time for mild reflection
    like revising for a test

    and in the future we'll look back
    at what we've done today
    and wonder at the logic
    of what we've done to while the hours away

    those endless hours those precious hours
    that slip right through like sand
    as though trapped in an hourglass
    constantly refilled by hand

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    See you tomorrow, or not, if you see me first, eh? :)
     
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    Friday today, and the fifth of the month. Today's poem is a bit of a departure for me, but I hope to follow with more odes like this, that do have some rhymes, but not always where you expect them to be. Anyway, have a gander.

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    She slipped her dressing gown over skin
    brushed her long and wayward hair
    away from her tired and sleepy eyes
    then stepping into her fluffy slippers
    opened the door and went into the hall
    the knock at the front door had stopped now
    but she unlocked and opened it anyhow
    just to see who'd come to call

    there stood the postman letter in hand
    "It's too big for the letterbox," he exclaimed
    "Okay," she said, "should I sign for it here?"
    "No, that's fine," he said and smiled
    a man well pleased with his career

    she shook her head and closed the door
    "I wonder what this letter's for?"
    "I wonder who it's from?" I shouted
    still laying in the messed up bed
    things like sudden letters arriving
    surely can mess up one's head

    it's just as though they know I'm here
    as though they smell me, know my fear
    those envelopes some brown some white
    that cross the country overnight
    to slip into my life unbidden
    when I thought I was safely hidden
    here at her's not at my own

    but in she came with knife in hand
    to open the letter she'd received
    it had a cardboard backing sleeve

    which is why the postman knocked
    he couldn't fold it down this letter
    or he'd have bent it altogether
    to push it through the narrow slot

    but anyway to cut it short
    the letter was a spiel of sorts
    it came from someone asking for
    some money to build halls for sports
    that no-one's heard of, no-one cares
    and we can't affort to buy any shares
    in what could be a costly venture

    no-one else will either I'll wager
    but I applaud the writer's cheek
    for spending out to try and seek
    to gain a financial footing for
    a business that's supposed to help
    us lose some weight and build up muscle
    but I don't want to have the hassle
    or get involved in money tussles

    instead I'll lie here watching her
    as she glides around the double bed
    her long hair falls around her head
    a halo in the light of morning
    lights the room like summer dawning

    she shines with pure and childlike beauty
    skin that radiates like snow
    if this was how I'd have to go
    I'd choose this moment now
    and pray
    to remember her forever this way

    my morning goddess standing free
    angel there for me to see
    she throws the letter to the floor
    drops the knife on the bedside table
    sees my eyes that must implore
    her to join me when she's able

    I'll do all I can to please her
    know her body's pleasure chart
    maps the road to her enjoyment
    this she knows with all her heart
    she lays with me and we enjoin
    and smiles at me as we embrace
    our loving time's about to start
    our private sport, the human race

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    Well, that's your lot for tonight. I'll see what I can do tomorrow. :)
     
  19. BJintheUK

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    Okay, so I haven't got much to say about today as I don't seem to have done a lot.

    Anyway, here's today's ode, enjoy!

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    Colours fill my eyes
    many shades of many dyes
    each one means a new emotion
    spreading out to my horizon
    bending me and shaping me to new dimensions
    sending me in new directions
    what will I find on arrival

    at my final destiny
    will it be
    happiness, or will I be sad
    will everything fade from good to bad
    who knows as we fill our live's palette
    with all the shades of unknown fate
    let's not tint our work with hate
    but instead squeeze out warmth and love
    colours to ignite our feelings

    light colours to reflect from ceilings
    all the brightness we desire
    just like flames within a fire
    something that warms us from inside
    to inflame our sense of pride
    give us cause to lift our hearts
    so be uplifted it's the start

    of something great and something new
    that will when painted spread around
    the canvas of our lives when filled
    to give a picture we can share

    a coloured image we can like
    a smooth yet brush ridged icon for
    our lives as lived here once before
    as we now see them on the wall
    and feel the inner siren call

    from all our past lives here displayed
    upon the canvas colours played
    with our emotions, our devotions
    all our strengths and greatest notions
    ideas given shape and form
    from summer meadow to raging storm
    and all that happens in between
    and all the things our eyes have seen

    we feel them as we take it in
    the thoughts here manifested seem
    to wrench us to our very spleen
    and turn our feelings on their heads
    as though inverted they'll be better
    bloodstream rushing to the brain
    to help us understand the gain

    that we enjoy when seeing art
    at least the colours there imparted
    of raw emotion splashed across
    the medium of life then tossed
    into the maelstrom to rotate
    and throw out all the things we hate
    but leave the good things for us all
    as witnessed by the clarion call

    that auction houses country wide
    can attest to though appalled
    at the prices people pay to
    own a painting just to say
    "It's mine! so go and buy your own"

    I'd like to but that begs the question
    where to get the funds for purchase
    something that seems to lack purpose
    other than to walls adorn
    with colour shape and story form

    perhaps I'll paint my own someday
    then I can at last display
    my own work with the colours strewn
    around my palette shades and hues

    that I find pleasing to the eye
    and when it's done and paint is dry
    I can release my life to fly
    into the void above the sky
    and there at last to finally
    live endless life in shades of joy
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    See you tomorrow. :)
     
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  20. BJintheUK

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    Early one today. This is a poem I submitted to an online magazine a week ago, but they've rejected it as it doesn't meet their requirementss. Ho hum, never mind, that means you get to see it now instead of some time in the future. Anyway, here it is, it actually has a name. It's called "Water is", and that's what it's about.

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    Water's a word
    it waters the world
    it flows forever as rivers
    it can lie still forever in lakes
    it freezes forever at the magnetic poles
    it steams forever through geysers
    and transforms iron to rusting red flakes

    but clear or salty
    blue or grey
    we drink it
    we piss it
    we wash it away

    it cleanses us inside
    it washes us clean
    we need it to live by
    without it we shrivel
    our skin turns to dust
    our organs to metal
    we cannot go on
    through desert or storm
    without it to nourish
    our humanoid form

    we need it for sex
    we need it for birth
    we need it for growing
    to increase our worth

    without the life giving liquid it seems
    that we soon fade away to nothing but dreams
    of fountains and waterfalls
    cascading torrents
    angelic rainbows
    of colours and light
    and dampness that seeps
    through our souls overnight

    with water we can all be all things to all others
    the wells of our being keep filling right through
    the spirit that moves us needs rivers to float
    all our lives as we slowly drift into the blue
    then look back through steamy filled watering eyes
    to a time before meaning that ran through the void
    and the coming of water that raised and devised
    a meaningful treasure that's grown and arrived
    with a race of us beings who gather and pray
    for our ration of life giving water each day

    the slickness of sweat
    the warmth of the bath
    the chill of hard ice
    the salt of your tears
    these things mark our lives out
    they punctuate time
    with water to drip out
    the seconds and hours
    the waterwheel turns
    and the grindstone it grinds

    what is the nature of water we ask
    can we control it or does it rule us
    the question is simple the answer is neat
    for us Adam's ale will always be sweet
    our bodies require it to fill out our flesh
    our cells can't divide if the water's not there
    our bones will harden to fossils unseen
    that crumble to dust but make earth complete

    the vision of ages reflects in its surface
    and sunlight will glint on the crest of the waves
    as breakers are dashed into rainbow hued droplets
    on coastal rock headlands all dotted with pools
    that are filled with small creatures
    who breathe through their gills
    and breed in the cool saltiness of the sea
    then flush their new offspring
    with each passing tide
    back into the ocean
    to swim as free creatures
    till swept far away
    or caught in the current
    and the pools once again

    the permanent sea that girdles the planet
    it moves with mysterious ease of its own
    and shapes the land masses
    erosion through friction
    yet never heats up as it passes
    the undersea coast
    the basin that holds it and shapes it in turn
    into oceans and seas and rivers and lakes
    that sinks into the ground to fill freshwater wells
    we can tap when we need it to water our crops

    so water is vital
    without it we die
    and everything else that lives here on the earth
    it seems a sad pastime
    a waste of good time
    to even imagine we can measure its worth

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    I'll write a fresh one for tomorrow, honest! :)
     
    Last edited: Feb 7, 2021
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