Do You Haiku?

Typically, ''traditional'' haikus are made up of three lines - and are split up in syllables for each line - 5/7/5. I think my haiku above is 5/7/6 because ''everyday'' I think is four syllables. :bigcry:

 

Our clothes were stolen
At the ghetto laundromat
Lesson learned, oh well

 

Its three, you're good.


See you all later
Future plans become present
Don't cry while i'm gone

 

Don't gooo

Okay, if you say so.

''Ev-er-y-day'' or ''Eve-ry-day''

 

I just looked it up because you got me curious. Its 3 syllables. Dictionary.com and google agrees with me.

 

Pixie dust is real
If you don't believe me, now
A fairy will cry

 

Love that feels so real
Spinning around in circles
Filling my heart up

 

Supermarkets suck
Don't want to go back at all
Need my paycheck though

 

And, vampire folklore
Can it possibly be true?
One bite will prove it ...

 

*Pete sitting in his chair outside looking at active ant hill*

Ants are on their way.
Will leave the hill to find prey.
Or new place to stay.

I just thought a Haiku rhyme would be a creative challenge.
Watch..... it probalby breaks Haiku law.

 

Nah, you're good.

 

Thanks D

 

Something in the air...
Disconcerting my lifeblood-
Neighbor's BBQ.

 

The first day of fall
Leaves will be changing colors
But, I live down here

 

Is it more Haiku to do the?

5 words/syllables
7 words/syllables
5 words/syllables

Or ?


5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

Is it right to do
Or Is it not right to do
That is the main thought.

 

@ DEIDRE:

Kevin sees fall start
He then checks out the forecast
Ninety on Sunday

 

I prefer the 5/7/5 syllable "rule"

 

Ok D.

Thanks

I will.......v

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g2BqLlVHlWA

I love this 80's song/vid.
Your answer gave me a good reason to post as a reply.

 

Falling, falling, fall
This love, this man, this feeling
Nothing can stop it

 

I want Halloween
Trick or treat, goblins and ghosts
Drink some witch's brew