Do You Haiku?

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Deidre, Sep 11, 2017.

  1. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    I like haikus, and thought to post some, here. If you're feeling creative, post some of your own. :)

    She was a light beam.
    The greatest love I have known.
    I wish she was here.
     
  2. jmadre

    jmadre Member

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    Simple, elegant, meaningful.
     
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  3. Total Darkness

    Total Darkness 100% Cocoa

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    Passionate dreamer
    Roaming around this planet
    Making dreams come true
     
  4. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    And you do roam around the planet, from what I've seen of your pics ^_^
     
  5. tumbling.dice

    tumbling.dice Visitor

    I can't stand Haikus.
    It started back in high school.
    Teacher was a prick.
     
  6. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Was at a red light
    Thought of the perfect haiku
    No pen or paper :(
     
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  7. Ged

    Ged Tits and Thigh Man.

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    A piece of green pepper

    Fell

    Off the wooden salad bowl:

    So what?
     
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  8. Total Darkness

    Total Darkness 100% Cocoa

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    Oh, i can relate
    On train, running, or walking
    Poems, haiku's, occur
     
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  9. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    I'll try this. Never did a Haiku in my lifetime.
    Very first one ever.

    Hate them on a train.....

    I won't eat green eggs and ham.....

    I won't Sam I am.....
     
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  10. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    lol... i love it :daisy:
     
  11. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Is Starbucks open, now
    That is the question today
    Will the line be long?
     
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  12. Piaf

    Piaf Senior Member

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    i don't like haiku
    i think it is so stupid
    i won't write haiku
     
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  13. Asmodean

    Asmodean Slo motion rider

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    There once was a man from Nantucket...
     
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  14. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Ever have too much
    I can never have too much
    Caffeine, I mean...pervs
     
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  15. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Love is in my Heart
    It beats for my first true love
    Til it beats no more
     
  16. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    Beat the drum, ba dum
    She will sing a song for you
    Dance lightly sweet friend
     
  17. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    I dunno haha
    Haikus are lots of fun though
    Write a haiku, boo
     
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  18. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Finding the rainbow
    Look beyond your tears and pain
    Everyday is new

    :daisy:
     
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  19. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Not sure if ''everyday'' is three or four syllables?? :blush5:
     
  20. Ged

    Ged Tits and Thigh Man.

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    Could you explain the haiku "Rules?"
     

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