Tell me what you think! :)

Discussion in 'Performing Arts' started by SadieScarlett, Feb 14, 2013.

  1. SadieScarlett

    SadieScarlett Member

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    A lil sumin I recorded the other day. Did everything but the drums (just downloaded a loop). Recorded in my bedroom on my laptop, so judge it to the production standards haha
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omNueEjNLJo
     
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  2. Losty

    Losty Member

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    It sounds kind of jazzy.
    Keep it up. You can make someting big one day ;)
     
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  3. Terrapin2190

    Terrapin2190 I am nature.

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    Reminds me of Gorillaz. Has a similar type of sound I think. I love the bluesy rhythm, lyrics are tantilizing. Harmonizing background vocals are a nice touch. Needs more bass I think... I like it tho.
     
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  4. Joker8six

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    spend some of the ganja money on equipment. Throw your laptop in the Trash. I think it eh on the right path, ter right the blusey approach is radical, but i. Just sounds hollow. No substance no soul. Because it was made on ur laptop. i guarenttee if u tried same jam with some gear. Then u cld.really get an amazing!. oh and sharpen up your voice. Just cos the beat drags doesnt mean u have to. That happens alot. lyrics are good, delivery, enegergy, timing of them not.good at all. Actually its pretty bad. but over all i think its very creative and lots of potential. alright now get outa here kid ur bothering me.p
     
  5. WOLF ANGEL

    WOLF ANGEL Senior Member - A Fool on the Hill Lifetime Supporter

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    For what it's worth - I'd slightly raise the tempo, although perhaps a bit more Goth on the video may balance it up (?)
     
  6. Chodpa

    Chodpa Senior Member

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    yo pac(ette) good work
     
  7. victoriaparker

    victoriaparker Members

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    Good work.
     
  8. rjhangover

    rjhangover Senior Member

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    Way to express yourself! Recording is a trial and error process....at least it has been for me....I'm not an engineer.

    What else you got? You cant pm me with it if you want.

    here's some places you can put your stuff for exposure....
    http://ourstage.com/profile/rjhangover/songs

    http://hangover1.bandcamp.com/

    http://www.bandmix.com/browse/
     
  9. soulcompromise

    soulcompromise Member HipForums Supporter

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    Really good stuff. You have a really pretty voice!
     
  10. Rosaly

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    This is exactly I wanted to say! I like it! You're doing great!
     

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