Your Eyes...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sexbanshee, Feb 23, 2007.

  1. sexbanshee

    sexbanshee Member

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    For scruuuub and his love:::

    Your eyes won't let my thoughts go back to sleep.
    Your words draw me across 2000 miles.
    I don't know you at all, and yet I know
    You better than my friends of many years.
    The days I spent with you are like a tape
    I play, rewind, play, rewind, and play.
    Whenever I remember something new,
    I feel as though you touched me on the cheek.
    I miss you as the grass awaits the wind,
    Or as the morning sky awaits the sun.
    Although I look for you in every doorway,
    I find only the darkness in my heart.

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  2. scruuuub

    scruuuub Member

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    once again , thank you so much for this :) i really appreciate it , and its beautiful i love it , the words just make me think of so much , i especially love the line "Or as the morning sky awaits the sun" because its my style i'm always using the sky , sun or the moon or things like that in anything i write :) .. thank you <3 !

    peace and love
     
  3. guinea

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    awesome poem, i just got back from my morning walk and saw an awesome sunrise, i love nature and often input it into my own poetry. im definately all about the sunrise, it brings a new day and new life
     
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