You'll Never Know

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Freakymetalchik, Aug 3, 2007.

  1. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    youll never know
    how much you hurt me
    ill never show you
    ill just laugh
    and pretend it doesnt matter
    that you tore my heart to pieces
    that you have another girl
    that i dont matter to you

    nothing else matters to me
    but ill never show you my real feelings
    ill just keep it all inside
    youll never know
    just what youve done to me
    ill smile, pretend it doesnt hurt
    while i bleed inside

    youll never see
    my sensitive side
    not ever again
    you were just a bad discision
    i dont want to talk to you
    not anymore
    even though love lingers on
    oh i still love you
    yes im still in love
    but that, youll never know
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Reading this, I can almost feel a vice closing around my heart.
    So much pain.

    It make me want to tell you that "Thing will get better with time."
    But that won't make sense to someone who feels this way, not for a long time.

    Great poem............
     
  3. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    Thanks for reading, glad you liked it :)
     
  4. mr_alleycat

    mr_alleycat Member

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    The healing begins:)
    I enjoyed the write freaky
     
  5. Naoki_ninja

    Naoki_ninja Bruce Lee's hero

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    oh, wow, i read the poem; and it reminded me of my ex boyfriend cheating on me not two years ago! yeah, things will get better! love ya, ~Danni
     
  6. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    Thanks glad you liked it! :)
     
  7. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    awww baby forget augy he dont mean shit
     
  8. Hope_B

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    very nice , it's like taking alot of pain but it's pleasant ,
     

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