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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lainey, Apr 28, 2007.

  1. Lainey

    Lainey Member

    i wrote it a few months ago inbetween games at a chess tournament
    i technically rap it
    but just being read i think you catch the flow. . . . .. .

    Free Association


    it isnt epilepsy like charles dodgeson
    its when the pen lifts the block
    your brain begs for the con
    that seemingly inexhaustable stream
    theadore geisel knows what i mean
    that its so easy to write immagery
    to see what you think
    and to hear what you dream or a revery
    whatever the case may be
    it is a remedy to unleash who you are
    and to reach out so far
    to the people who need
    to let go of conformity
    or to be entertained
    in a world thats so strained
    to succeed like society
    and at times even i need to be
    reminded to breath to take it easy
    to confide that life
    is not so hard to survive
    when you look on the bright side of the line
    thats been holding you back
    from exposeing your mind
    to its unbound potential
    and it is essential
    to recognize what you have found
    by puting a rhythm and a sound
    to what comes naturally
    its called reality
     
  2. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

    ah, lovely! I had to search the names, honestly! I can't wait for old age, dementia!
     
  3. Lainey

    Lainey Member

    most people do have to look up or ask about the names. i would have used their pen names but i like to make people learn new things
     
  4. ChaosPandion

    ChaosPandion Member

    Very enjoyable.

    The flow it great.
     
  5. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

    Great job :)
     
  6. dylanzeppelin

    dylanzeppelin daydream believer

    "it is a remedy to unleash who you are
    and to reach out so far
    to the people who need
    to let go of conformity
    or to be entertained
    in a world thats so strained
    to succeed like society
    and at times even i need to be
    reminded to breath to take it easy
    to confide that life
    is not so hard to survive"

    I LOVE that part. Beautifully written and totally relatable. =)
     

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