you know when someone loves you...

Discussion in 'U.K.' started by Jaz Delorean, Jan 21, 2005.

  1. Jaz Delorean

    Jaz Delorean Senior Member

    You know when someone loves you
    when you have a new pink floyd album
    and all you want to do is put it on,
    take it in,
    and all she wants to do is be with you
    share it with you,
    lying in a warm place,
    her head resting on your chest,
    your hand touching her cheek
    as you both escape to pompeii
    on an otherwise gloomy day
    it meant a lot to me
    a lovely memory
     
  2. tulip

    tulip Member

    as i said to you before... that is very beautiful... a moment in time... a fragment of eternity... and all that... just beautiful!
     
  3. flowerchild17

    flowerchild17 I practice safe sax.

    I really enjoy it - once again, very good use of language :) And image! That's always been a very good focus in your writing I've noticed :)
     
  4. stardust

    stardust Banned

    your poem is not just words but in my head i'm actually there, listening to it!

    amazing!

    peace and love
    stardust
    xxx
     
  5. showmet

    showmet olen tomppeli

    I think this is what poetry is for ... someone who feels intensely and completely and is able to express the idea in words which make the experience real and new. I like the way you use irregular meter to express an apparent stream of consciousness. This is the way I would like to be able to write...
     
  6. Dandelion_Blood

    Dandelion_Blood Gremlin

    aww, that is really really touching :) i love it
     

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