You know when someone loves you when you have a new pink floyd album and all you want to do is put it on, take it in, and all she wants to do is be with you share it with you, lying in a warm place, her head resting on your chest, your hand touching her cheek as you both escape to pompeii on an otherwise gloomy day it meant a lot to me a lovely memory
as i said to you before... that is very beautiful... a moment in time... a fragment of eternity... and all that... just beautiful!
I really enjoy it - once again, very good use of language And image! That's always been a very good focus in your writing I've noticed
your poem is not just words but in my head i'm actually there, listening to it! amazing! peace and love stardust xxx
I think this is what poetry is for ... someone who feels intensely and completely and is able to express the idea in words which make the experience real and new. I like the way you use irregular meter to express an apparent stream of consciousness. This is the way I would like to be able to write...