you know when someone loves you...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jaz Delorean, Jan 21, 2005.

  1. Jaz Delorean

    Jaz Delorean Senior Member

    You know when someone loves you
    when you have a new pink floyd album
    and all you want to do is put it on,
    take it in,
    and all she wants to do is be with you
    share it with you,
    lying in a warm place,
    her head resting on your chest,
    your hand touching her cheek
    as you both escape to pompeii
    on an otherwise gloomy day
    it meant a lot to me
    a lovely memory
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

    Perfect little package, great depiction. Made me romance-sick.
     
  3. Jaz Delorean

    Jaz Delorean Senior Member

    hehe yeah... i like romance :)
     
  4. Burbot

    Burbot Dig my burdei

    grwat little diddy..makes me slightly lonely, but good feeling if you know what i mean
     
  5. Bhaskar

    Bhaskar Members

    Nice job...Id leave out the last two lines though. as we both escape to pompeii is just the perfect endng.
     
  6. *peace*child*

    *peace*child* Member

    Nice poem. I love Pink Floyd...out of all the music my boyfriend and I like he doesn't like them that much but he doesn't complain when I want to listen to them. Keep writing, I hope to read more of your poems! Peace and love!
     
  7. Jaz Delorean

    Jaz Delorean Senior Member

    wow thanks guys, thanks for the comment Bhaskar :)
    love jaz
     

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