Writing cliches

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  1. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

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    "I light a cigarette" - I don't give a fuck. Smoking is cinematic, it's not literary. You're not the only person who smokes, unimportant.

    "For some reason" - Laziest piece of shit sentence I can imagine in a book. Stop that.


    :toetap05:
     
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  3. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

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    :mad:
     
    bluesafire, Feb 12, 2009
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  5. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

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    What?
     
    Mr. Mojo Risin', Feb 12, 2009
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  7. I'minmyunderwear

    I'minmyunderwear Newbie

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    for some reason, this thread makes me want to light a cigarette.
     
    I'minmyunderwear, Feb 12, 2009
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  9. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

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    I just said that, like 2 posts ago on your Letterman thread.

    repeat :mad:
     
    bluesafire, Feb 12, 2009
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  11. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

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    hehe
     
    bluesafire, Feb 12, 2009
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  13. beanbag

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    You seem angry. Is there anything you'd like to talk about?
     
    beanbag, Feb 12, 2009
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  15. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

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    I'm sorry, are you writing a book about your forum posts?
     
    Mr. Mojo Risin', Feb 12, 2009
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  17. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

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    Not interested, queer.
     
    Mr. Mojo Risin', Feb 12, 2009
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  19. beanbag

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    There's really no need to take that tone.
     
    beanbag, Feb 12, 2009
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  21. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

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    not yet.
     
    bluesafire, Feb 12, 2009
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  23. beanbag

    beanbag Member

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    How about now?
     
    beanbag, Feb 12, 2009
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  25. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

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    I'm waiting for inspiration.
     
    bluesafire, Feb 12, 2009
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  27. beanbag

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    now?
     
    beanbag, Feb 12, 2009
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  29. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

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    Stop it, beanfag. You are taking a crap in my thread.
     
    Mr. Mojo Risin', Feb 12, 2009
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  31. beanbag

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    shhhh

    You're going to mess up Blue's concentration
     
    beanbag, Feb 12, 2009
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  33. I'minmyunderwear

    I'minmyunderwear Newbie

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    you asked for it.

    [​IMG]
     
    I'minmyunderwear, Feb 12, 2009
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  35. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

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    there it is! that's the sign I was looking for!!
     
    bluesafire, Feb 12, 2009
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  37. beanbag

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    I just hope your book isn't crappy
     
    beanbag, Feb 12, 2009
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  39. telephone

    telephone weird

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    I'm usually the last person to say anything about these kinds of things, but...

    why are you such a douche bag?
     
    telephone, Feb 12, 2009
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