Writing cliches

Discussion in 'Random Thoughts' started by Mr. Mojo Risin', Feb 12, 2009.

  1. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

    "I light a cigarette" - I don't give a fuck. Smoking is cinematic, it's not literary. You're not the only person who smokes, unimportant.

    "For some reason" - Laziest piece of shit sentence I can imagine in a book. Stop that.


    :toetap05:
     
  2. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

    :mad:
     
  3. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

  4. I'minmyunderwear

    I'minmyunderwear voice of sexy

    for some reason, this thread makes me want to light a cigarette.
     
  5. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

    I just said that, like 2 posts ago on your Letterman thread.

    repeat :mad:
     
  6. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

    hehe
     
  7. beanbag

    beanbag Member

    You seem angry. Is there anything you'd like to talk about?
     
  8. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

    I'm sorry, are you writing a book about your forum posts?
     
  9. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

    Not interested, queer.
     
  10. beanbag

    beanbag Member

    There's really no need to take that tone.
     
  11. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

    not yet.
     
  12. beanbag

    beanbag Member

    How about now?
     
  13. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

    I'm waiting for inspiration.
     
  14. beanbag

    beanbag Member

  15. Mr. Mojo Risin'

    Mr. Mojo Risin' Senior Member

    Stop it, beanfag. You are taking a crap in my thread.
     
  16. beanbag

    beanbag Member

    shhhh

    You're going to mess up Blue's concentration
     
  17. I'minmyunderwear

    I'minmyunderwear voice of sexy

    you asked for it.

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  18. bluesafire

    bluesafire Senior Member

    there it is! that's the sign I was looking for!!
     
  19. beanbag

    beanbag Member

    I just hope your book isn't crappy
     
  20. telephone

    telephone weird

    I'm usually the last person to say anything about these kinds of things, but...

    why are you such a douche bag?
     

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