? would you believe me if I told you my dream we were both flying in the air care free on ivory feathered wings unashamed of all our skin exposed to the moan of the wind would you believe me if I told you we were making love in the sky from afar we were like doves our wings entangled that most protractors don’t know how to factor would you believe me if I told you how we then fell fast asleep in our nest dreaming of what we do best our wings for blankets covering everything we are not afraid to hide when we make love high in the blue sky would you believe me if I told you that you made my dream come true ?
Works very well...moves right along and has three distinct sections that all weave together nicely. Nice thoughts, makes one feel a nice glow inside. Thanks for posting it.
this is absolutely lovely... i was going to quote my favorite parts... but it is ALL good, peregrine! a man of many talents, for sure!
Good rythmers, hence refreshing and inspiring ~! I liked your poetry. Reminds me of Angelopoulus (Greek flim-maker)... and his willingness to share his solitude with mother nature. Love.. FP
Another excellent poem, peregrine… The first thing that stood out to me was the structure, it created a nice flow that you worked wonderfully. Your images were great as well, taking almost odd twists at just the right moment. I enjoyed this one much, thanks!
