Within

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick666, Dec 7, 2006.

  1. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    No more tears can fall
    From this broken soul
    Trapped within a broken body,
    Cut and mutilated.

    The blood is red and thick,
    The only way to feel again,
    The only way to know that
    This is real.

    Pain the only friend,
    A constant companion,
    One who will never
    Let you down.

    No more tears will fall.
    Not tonight, just keep
    everything bottled up,
    deep within, hidden.

    Peace and love
     
  2. hippypoet33

    hippypoet33 Member

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    Yeah, ya know....This must be dark place to be yet with the irony of comfort, and it humbles me when I think of my own struggles compared to this.
     
  3. Flowers In My Hair

    Flowers In My Hair Spontaneous Joy

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    This is about as different from my work as possible. It's awakening for me, to read something like this. Thank you for sharing it, and may your days be filled with peace and love always.
     
  4. DroopySnoopy

    DroopySnoopy The ORIGINAL Dr. Droop

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    Wow, that is sadly beautiful. And a bit melancholy. But I really love the way you are able to pull us into the writing so quickly, even if it is a place we'd rather not visit. Beautiful. ;)
     

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