Who knew

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by children of korn, Aug 5, 2007.

  1. children of korn

    children of korn Member

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    Who knew
    i would grow up
    to be just like you
    A mindless, wandering zombie
    roaming the earth
    not knowing my own self-worth

    Who knew
    that my life would
    come crashing down
    just like the speed of light
    because i was becoming
    your little clone

    Who knew
    that you would control me
    until the very end
    and tell me that i should
    be sorry for my sins

    Who knew
    that i would turn out
    to be something i'm not
    and in not being me
    my soul starts to rot

    Who knew
    that everything you told me
    was a lie
    it was just another way
    for you to get inside my head
    and control me until i'm dead

    Who knew
    that i would take all
    my anger out on you

    But tommorrow
    is a new day
    and i will no longer
    let you control me
    and make me into
    something i'm not
    and there's nothing
    you can do to stop me

    Who knew
    that the tables would
    turn and that i would make
    a fool out of you and
    become my own person
    and leave you standing in
    a ditch where you will feel
    all the pain that you have
    caused me and die with
    all the lies that you told me

    Who knew
    Who knew
     
  2. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    I like it, who's it about?
     
  3. Chess Hotel

    Chess Hotel Member

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    Even though it's depressing, I like the flow of it :). Is this about a parent or something?

    Don't stop writing poetry!!
     
  4. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Yes, good work.
     
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