Who Am I

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lion1978, Sep 30, 2021.

  1. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    I am your right
    I am your wrong,

    I am your boredom
    and your joy,

    I bring you light
    I bring you dark,

    I am killed
    and often waisted,

    I am yours and yours alone
    yet I am everyone's,

    I belong to none
    and I belong to all,

    I am your friend
    I am your enemy,

    I am the one who can not be contained.

    I am the one without you would not be.

    I am the one who is always there.

    I am simple yet too complex to understand.

    I am TIME
     
  2. Totally Yoda

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    Nice! I like that :)
     
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  3. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    Thank you I like that you like it :)
     
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  4. ~Zen~

    ~Zen~ California Tripper Administrator

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    You are wise to write such inspiring words, and kind to share this freely.
     
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  5. wooleeheron

    wooleeheron Brain Damaged Lifetime Supporter

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    You left out "I am real and illusory", "I express particle-wave duality", and "I am context dependent".
     
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  6. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    Thank you thank you, and I don't think I could ever charge for my humble words and thoughts.
    OH btw, I even did a spell check on it before posting it...surely the world is commming to an end :D

    Indeed I did, I do apologize for that.

    Thank you very much
     
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  7. Candy Gal

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    Very good
     
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  8. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    Thank you.

    I do actually belive I made one mistake in spelling, but that the spell check didn't catch it because it's a word just not the right word/spelling
     
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  9. Candy Gal

    Candy Gal Lifetime Supporter

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    Write some more
    I love poetry
    Doesn't matter about spelling x
     
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  10. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    I do intent to write more.

    and spelling does matter, if one day I come across miss pell and she sees how I've often abused the spelling of words she'll surely spank me
     
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  11. Candy Gal

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    Listen ere.
    I bought a new fir coat in Manchester yesterday. Actually it was fake fur. Lol
     
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  12. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    It wasn't lion fur was it ?
     
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  13. wooleeheron

    wooleeheron Brain Damaged Lifetime Supporter

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    I do the math, its an occupational hazard to correct people's contextual vagueness.
     
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  14. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    My old math teacher told me I was bad at math...I blame it on her she never told what to use it for
     
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  15. wooleeheron

    wooleeheron Brain Damaged Lifetime Supporter

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    I cracked the analog logic of the Tao Te Ching, and am about a century ahead of the rest of the planet. Its spooky, and too weird for words. I see and know things even the Taoist masters have no clue exist. Not even the Taoists want to read my poetry, because it doesn't flatter them.
     
  16. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    I am to dumb to even know what that is :D
     
  17. wooleeheron

    wooleeheron Brain Damaged Lifetime Supporter

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    It translates as "The Way of Ignorant Virtue" and is mathematical potty humor, still being reinvented by little kids everywhere to this day. :)
     
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  18. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    Ahhhh I see.
     
  19. wooleeheron

    wooleeheron Brain Damaged Lifetime Supporter

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    I learned my first poem "Shit Happens" when I was five years old, then found it in the Tao Te Ching. :)
     
  20. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    Is that the one that goes "some comes here to sit and think,
    some comes here to shit and stink,
    I came here to check my balls and wrote this bullshit on the walls"?
     
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