where do you go at night??

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Fierce_Flawless, Jun 14, 2004.

  1. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    the darkness of
    the room inviting
    like death before
    the dawn deciding
    it's taking me home
    because i remember
    that when i am asleep
    time and space dissolve
    into the sacred deep
    and i am never alone
    i am never alone
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    i love the reflection of life in this
    how to rest will be so beautiful....

    long may you write..
    love n peace from saff
     
  3. EdgeUcatE

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    I liked this poem I agree with SFB on the meaning, keep at it, I'd like to see longer ones from you. peace
     
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