When a dew drop falls

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bonsai, May 30, 2006.

  1. Bonsai

    Bonsai Member

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    When a dew drop falls?
    ...that's not it at all!

    It races to the edge
    of a leaf or a rim
    holds for a moment
    calculating the wind

    Then dives with delight
    embracing the splash
    the deathly collide
    when dew and earth clash

    A dew drop understands
    and knows natures Art
    the smaller it becomes
    first risers to heaven

    On an early morning mist
    lies the secret dew wish
    when the sun and earth kiss
    arrives the dew drops lift

    when a dew drop falls ...
    it is racing to heaven!
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I like how you turned it inside out, falling = racing to heaven, even when it seems totally the opposite of that. Ah, ya gotta love the cycles...
     
  3. Bonsai

    Bonsai Member

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    exactly~ we, bound by gravity, as is a dew drop but yet evaporation brings it back to square one, heaven <grin thanks for the read/ comment (~_~)
     
  4. mysticmindlover

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    I never thought of it that way... very nice :)
     

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