What really matters?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by yyyesiam2, Aug 19, 2007.

  1. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    I don't know what I am.....
    But I'm dying.
    I don't really understand.....
    But I'm trying.

    In moments of quiet,
    I feel closer to something.
    Thinking drains my soul,
    And my end is always coming.

    What can I do?
    What is this life worth?
    What action carries meaning,
    When you're dying since birth?

    What argument really matters?
    What comes from above?
    What can matter more,
    Than how much you love?
     
  2. elayne

    elayne no longer available

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    You have captured the age old question of the "human condition" well.
     
  3. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Very good.
    It says so much, and it does it "simply".
     
  4. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    I really like this =)
     
  5. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    the comments i get here mean alot to me. thanks.
     

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