Well, shit… here we go again.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dazedgatsby, Jul 15, 2013.

  1. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

    So .. Fuck it. There is this female that I ... "like"
    And I honestly don't think she likes me at all.
    So I've been in a shitty mood the past two days
    And I felt like coming up with something
    It sucks.
    But whatever.
    It's something right?
    Right?




    If I'm not here tomorrow I'll say goodbye
    If you're not here today I wonder why
    Getting fucked up, trying and trying
    Sighing
    Doubtful through and through
    Everything I try to mend
    It all breaks in the end
    Might as well hang it all up
    Maybe create my own new friend

    Sometimes I feel so violent
    And the world is turning too fast
    So I get fucked up
    But these changes don't last
    So all I can think of is you
    Through and through
    Doubtful
    That you think about me too
     
  2. r0llinstoned

    r0llinstoned Gute Nacht, süßer Prinz

    Very nice! :2thumbsup:
     
  3. Pressed_Rat

    Pressed_Rat Do you even lift, bruh?

    It sucks to be crazy about a woman who doesn't share the same feelings.
     
  4. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

  5. *MAMA*

    *MAMA* Perfectly Imperfect

    Sad, but very well written.
     
  6. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

    Love unrequited is a blessing. It gives you the opportunity to move on from your compulsion and search for something real. Seize it!
     
  7. Mason Grey

    Mason Grey Member

    the first paragraph is closest to real feeling.
    the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs are mechanical and stale
    loosen up
     

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