Welcome to my World

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by El_Qwerty, Nov 7, 2005.

  1. El_Qwerty

    El_Qwerty Banned

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    sitting in my boxers eating apple jacks
    welcome to my world

    welcome to my world

    whacking it to late night cinemax
    welcome to my world

    jagermeister and captain crunch
    nicotine and the brady bunch
    i'm building a boat out of pudding cups
    welcome to my world

    non-stop no-girl action without you

    this old shirt is starting to stink
    i don't give a damn what people think
    i can take a leak in the kitchen sink!
    welcome to my world

    no you needn't shed a tear
    'cause I've got waffles and I've got beer
    and i've got mr. belvedere!
    welcome to my world

    don't want to be here

    don't want to be here
    tonight
    can't stand another episode of cheers
    tonight
    i hate that woody
    i hate diane
    frasier and norm
    and that dumbass mailman
     
  2. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    thats really good.
     
  3. Or's well

    Or's well Member

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    I'm not sure that I wanted to be welcomed to your world...until the waffles and beer :eek:)

    I like the poem, raw and spontaneous?
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Good, but I didn't like the last bit about Cheers. You totally changed the flow of it. Up till that, though, was pretty damn good. Anyways, just my opinion.
     

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