No one talks, No one thinks. The chains of expectations, drowning them- into submission. The rules win, The people's souls have died. We are slaves. Meh, it's not that great...but it's how I felt in English today...
hi there i love this to be aware of what is around is enough... just keep helping others to see to talk to express life love to tell all if you feel the words to openly say whats happening in this world of pain,war and divide to be aware and speak out like your words above this is how we change a soul a life a world for the better for the human race for we are the world. ...... love npeace from saff
hey, that's great! That's what the world really needs though...for people to speak up for what they believe in and against what they don't!
I know the feeling of despair you have. If you care about the world it's impossible not to share it. Don't give up. And when you continue to write, embrace one of the keys: always extend the metaphor. 'The chains of expectations, drowning them- into submission.' This is a mixed metaphor. Avoid them. They're deadly.
