War

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by CrucifiedDreams, Jun 2, 2006.

  1. CrucifiedDreams

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    I'm sitting on the brink
    Of a war ready to be break out
    The blood of my heart
    On your hands
    I wake up wanting to scream
    But I know you wont hear it anyway
    I try not to let the scars show
    I don’t want you to feel
    The pain that I endure
    Fake smiles come
    A dime a dozen
    But you don’t know better
    To tell the difference
    I carry your burdens
    As if they were my own
    I’ve master the look in my eyes
    So you see calmness
    Someone who has it all calculated to fit
    Following the yellow high way lines
    Just trying to get by
    But the truth still remains
    I’m sitting on the brink
    Of a war ready to break out
    And it will be you
    Who has the blood of my heart
    On your hands
     
  2. DevilSaNgel

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    Did you actually imagine yourself in a war? The poem is well crafted and easy to understand.
     

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