Wandering and wondering

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  1. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    Wandering and Wondering

    Night came on and so I thought that a fly buzzed in the silence
    I thought that it could be, but I realized silence is a tree
    So I looked at the stars, I wondered where they were
    I thought somewhere and realized, they are everywhere
    And so I wandered and wondered all night long
    Around the hills, up the trees and some light breeze



    EDIT- the title of the thread is supposed to be "wandering and wondering". I'm stoned and pressed the 'enter' button thus creating the thread before it was finished.
     
  2. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    I liked this

    Night came on and so I thought that a fly buzzed in the silence
    I thought that it could be, but I realized silence is a tree
     
  3. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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    Thank you.

    That is the best part, the other half is kind of 'eh'..

    I was stoned when I wrote it.
     
  4. dazedgatsby

    dazedgatsby shitheel

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  5. When tha wind blows
    So so the scented breeze
    Mighty gales high above
    Traveller clouds around
    Round and round falling down
    Until we all cry and
    Soak back into the ground
     

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