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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LivinNreflection, Aug 29, 2004.

  1. LivinNreflection

    LivinNreflection Member

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    The day is dark
    The sky is still
    Dogs are barking
    They're out to kill
    Get away Hurry!
    Here they come
    I see them but they're all blurry
    Screaming, shouting as they run closer
    They got me
    I'm being sucked in, once again
    Let me go I want to be free
    Threw be back in the pin
    I'm captured once again
     
  2. Spyder

    Spyder La dah de dah

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    Didnt really like it to be honest, what is it suppose to be expressing?
     
  3. sunflowerAlys

    sunflowerAlys Member

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    yeah... i think that's crap :)
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I like how "that's crap" is followed by a smiley!
     
  5. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    I tell you, the greatest wisdom is hidden within the excretions of untrained minds. If we all shit jewels, they would certainly lose their luster. Indeed, would they not still be shit?


    much love :)
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    A Zen poem :)
     
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