untitled, unfinished...thing...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Jan 13, 2005.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    i don't know if i should end it here, or not.

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    he stood in the corner of the middle of the street, and says something to another that wasn't quite the same. then suddenly, as if pivoting on an axis, he turned. slowly, he pulled against the shade and split into the time and a name came to it's head but pulled away when the right moment was present...something new was then posted on a sign that displayed public abbreviations and everyone can sound their horns, in appreciation. the weather's fine all around the area, but everywhere else it's making sudden changes.
     
  2. ArtistofPeace

    ArtistofPeace Senior Member

    I really like that. The flow of it is captivating.
     
  3. Soulless||Chaos

    Soulless||Chaos SelfInducedExistence

    Yeah, it definitely has an interesting flow... Just off enough you know? :D
     
  4. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

    ~* This one deffinitely has something about it but I think I need to read it when I'm in a different mind set. Really enjoyed the one you posted in somethingwitty's thread but I prefer to say so here and let that thread fall away. Different style or content, but whatever it is, I did enjoy these much more.*~
     
  5. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    thank you. :)
     

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