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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Carlybee, May 26, 2009.

  1. Carlybee

    Carlybee Member

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    May to October blends
    together in these parts
    What the sun doesn’t blister
    the humidity wilts

    Sparrows whistle in dawn
    and the cicadas deafen
    dusk with plaintive rings

    Between the start and end
    of day, the noise of a busy
    planet whirs down the asphalt
    tacky from the heat, rutted
    from the weight of progress
    or regress depending upon
    your outlook

    Oppression is not always a social
    condition, sometimes it sits
    in the air like a stinkbomb,
    fused by a hundred
    days of sameness
    but always waiting

    Until the gentle cleanse
    of an afternoon rain
    wipes the chalklines from
    sheets, and cakes the rust
    on cherry pickers lining
    the pummeled streets

    Until tar soaked caliche crumbles
    beneath shoeless feet, and
    air is lifted for a moment
    in defiance of tradition
     
  2. rollingalong

    rollingalong Banned

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    wonderful imagery.....thank you carlybeee from texas
     
  3. Carlybee

    Carlybee Member

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    Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
     
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