Unforgiven

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GirlInTheGreenGrass, Nov 27, 2004.

  1. GirlInTheGreenGrass

    GirlInTheGreenGrass Member

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    Love gives me wings. Permission to fly to the heavens, it melts the ice around my heart, allows access to my depths through my eyes. Love makes me glow with vibrant oras, and makes me shine like a reflection of light. Love is all inside, I strive to make it all around me, it's what i hold close to at night.

    When love hurt me, my wings were taken, my heart blackened. I put up poisoness shields to protect me.
    When love hurt me I sealed up my eyes with staples, and slept naked in the cold.
    When love hurt me...that's when I hurt love.

    <3
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi there

    wonderful truth here...


    how love can turn us against its self
    when ones heart gets hurt
    or filled with the anger of losing love can be the same...

    but all in all
    love will melt the ring of ice
    for all hearts to feel again.

    very lovely insight to the word love also
    how we tend to tread on the ones we love
    through our love...

    love n peace from saff
     
  3. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    Wow, the concept of this poem so applys to every soul. When a heart is broken, it is hard to love again until we are completely healed. Time is all we need. The way you ended this poem is spectacular.
     
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