unclassified random thought

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hello, May 15, 2004.

  1. hello

    hello ~*resonance*~

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    the cops are circling again.
    i hear sirens going down the street, then down another street.
    there's a helicopter hovering over my house, making it kind of hard to sleep.

    my thoughts extend to the limit of this game-reality...
    how we all consciously or otherwise,
    assumed the form of human beings, to enclose our formless souls,
    merely for something to do with a whole lot of eternity.

    i can recognize beauty out there, and it reflects beauty in here.
    i can recognize a flaw without, and it shows a flaw within.

    i suppose i could go on. i'm thinking and i can't stop.
    to say that this is just one thought, is not random enough.
    it's just what i do, to prevent the thoughts from piling up,
    and creating a backlog in the mind.

    if i've gotten across anything at all... maybe bridged a gap somewhere,
    maybe sent these word-tone-vibrations in symbolic form to resonate in a
    different place, maybe even stricken a glimpse of a meaning in someone's world,
    then this will all be worth it.
     
  2. booshnoogs

    booshnoogs loves you

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    This is the oldest non-closed thread in random thoughts so I thought it should be bumped to the top of the list.

    *bump*
     
  3. booshnoogs

    booshnoogs loves you

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    Except it appearantly was moved to Poetry even though it shows up the the random thoughts queue.
     
  4. zodiacflower

    zodiacflower Member

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    *intresting.........*bump*
     
  5. Tipo Sensuale

    Tipo Sensuale Senior Member

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    its definitely a poem.
     
  6. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I'm sure this "hello" person would be happy that her long-ago thought stream was still being read by others. Not the best poem ever, but since I'm not sure that was the intent anyways, it still remains "interesting," as zodiacflower said.
     
  7. 121

    121 Senior Member

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    I'm necroposting :D
     
  8. wild-flowers

    wild-flowers forever arbitrary

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    this is beautiful
     
  9. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    goodbye, hello
     
  10. Autumn's Angel

    Autumn's Angel Member

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  11. Addicted!

    Addicted! Guest

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    I think that since we all read it, the word-tone vibrations resonated in our heads, right? So hello was therefore successful in her endeavors.
     
  12. deleted

    deleted Visitor

    may be habit forming..
     
  13. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    its beautiful.
     

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