typewriter poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Jun 20, 2006.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    hmmm....hummm....thinking and humming and buzzing....what is this?​
    a form of paranoia, or just a machine? what?​
    a machine.​
    click, click, click, wrrrr, bzzzzz, aaaaah.....unnatural thought.​
    a waiting period of about and hour and 15 minutes. so what?​
    conversations i had with an electric girl. for some​
    reason, i'm terrified, amazed, and glad. just one more​
    free mind, floatin about the breeze like a leaf....groovy.​
    oh, leaves and branches cling to sticky summer sweat-drenched evening. yes.​
    couldn't we just be the REM induced dream of some other mind?​
    wet with sweat and the terrible cramps​
    that winos get...am i unnerved? maybe.​
    am i insane? most likely.​
  2. Biida

    Biida Member

    There's some crazy rhythm to that, man, and it makes me want to dance!

    Very shibby.
  3. Bonsai

    Bonsai Member

    vibrant poem, lured by the title, I enjoyed your write!
  4. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    Thanks, you guys! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)
  5. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

    i love the rhythm in this
    really, really good :D
  6. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    Thanks! :D
  7. janedoe

    janedoe Member

    dreamy :)
  8. Apples+Oranjes

    Apples+Oranjes Bekkasaur

    I love love love this one, James. One of my favorite newer works of you by far. Fast paced, and exciting... LOVE IT.
  9. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

    Thank yah, lovely. :D

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