Truth be Told

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blackheartbitch, Aug 11, 2007.

  1. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    im not so sure the name fits. But anyway this about a man i used to see on my way to school everyday, he would walk the streets teaching about the truth. All comments/critiques are welcome.

    Truth be Told

    The alarm clock screams:
    "Wake up you worthless peice of shit,
    throw on some holey ass tshirt and worn jeans."
    You know what you must do
    go, go walk the streets for another day
    preach the truth people refuse to see
    tell them all about the clones society
    makes and the hypocracy taught to our children
    the people mock and spit at you saying:
    "you're a crazy bastard and you don't know shit."
    You let their words sink in and tear you apart,
    blackening your soul, but you forget the pain
    each morning as you prepare to make them see
    what the world has come to.

    Some people try to shove money in your face,
    and others give you a look of pitty
    you don't need their money or pitty,
    you have plenty of money and a home and a family
    but they don't see that for you walk the street and they
    just assume your homeless and want money.
    No, you choose to be here trying to save the world
    just by word of mouth.
     
  2. Freakymetalchik

    Freakymetalchik BITCH.

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    Not bad, it's interesting. :D
     
  3. dragonangelbiker

    dragonangelbiker Member

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    sounds pretty good.keep on writing.i can totally relate to this
     
  4. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    ^thanks guys
     

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