Cloud break Stratosphere sonnet The dust settles On the qualm of reason Alive Rise from the depths of elder forests The huts on the hills Passion overfills the ancient village This place has come of age Is now without time No future or past Only a spot on the line It is now And forever You are always here And it is always now The clock is only concept True reality
jim would be mighty proud of ya if he could read those words...........if you ask me (and i am noone)............expand your vocabulary.........you have some talent there,i think.............peace
Thanks. I know I need to get a thesaurus. I do find that I am limited by my word choice. But my best poem is no match for Morrison's worst. I'm not so sure he would be proud, but he is my biggest influence. I have written poems far better than this one. Thanks again. I appreciate your input.
well, no one will ever be as good as morrison, that is impossible, but i think this is a wonderul peice! just keep writing,
sorry,if you thought i was "comparing" your talent to jims. what i should of said was that, jim would be mighty flattered. i need to pay attention to how i word things! but anyway you still have potential,in my eyes...but i don't really know jack (smile)
Thanks alot guys, it means a lot to me. I believe I have some talent too, this is my only one though.
