Tried to write a song today

it sounds like a fucking 6 year old wrote it. I have so many emotions all jumbled up into one I don't even know where to start the process. I really wish I had someone to jam with, but all of my friends here don't play any instruments.

 

Do you play guitar?

 

Yes I play guitar, a little bass guitar and I am teaching myself to play the drums now.

 

At least you have a new idea for your next song.

 

And I should name it Meth Bible Camp Road, lol

 

that would fit perfectly in an album named Dead End

 

If you can’t write one then steal one …. :2thumbsup:
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There's a lady who's sure all that glitters is gold

And she's buying the stairway to heaven.
When she gets there she knows, if the stores are all closed
With a word she can get what she came for.
Ooh, ooh, and she's buying the stairway to heaven. ​

There's a sign on the wall but she wants to be sure
'Cause you know sometimes words have two meanings.
In a tree by the brook, there's a songbird who sings,
Sometimes all of our thoughts are misgiven.
Ooh, it makes me wonder,
Ooh, it makes me wonder. ​

There's a feeling I get when I look to the west,
And my spirit is crying for leaving.
In my thoughts I have seen rings of smoke through the trees,
And the voices of those who stand looking.
Ooh, it makes me wonder,
Ooh, it really makes me wonder. ​

And it's whispered that soon if we all call the tune
Then the piper will lead us to reason.
And a new day will dawn for those who stand long
And the forests will echo with laughter. ​

If there's a bustle in your hedgerow, don't be alarmed now,
It's just a spring clean for the May queen.
Yes, there are two paths you can go by, but in the long run
There's still time to change the road you're on.
And it makes me wonder. ​

Your head is humming and it won't go, in case you don't know,
The piper's calling you to join him,
Dear lady, can you hear the wind blow, and did you know
Your stairway lies on the whispering wind. ​

And as we wind on down the road
Our shadows taller than our soul.
There walks a lady we all know
Who shines white light and wants to show
How everything still turns to gold.
And if you listen very hard
The tune will come to you at last.
When all are one and one is all
To be a rock and not to roll. ​

And she's buying the stairway to heaven.

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Hotwater

 

Love the song (duh who doesn't, and it is where my name came from), but I don't feel like getting sued, lol.

 

A little inspiration


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oTykohWAPRg&feature=player_embedded#at=19


Hotwater

 

Lol good find! I almost forgot about that show.

 

yeah lol at the video

''I should be homeles''

lol

 

Haha he haha ha haha he haha ha LMAO!!!

 

I hope you keep what you do write as maybe at some point it will all come together and you will have inspiration from past writings.

 

Lol I threw it away.

 

You should keep a book with all of them in it. Seriously there may be a point in time when some of them combine into one song.

 

i tried to right a wrong today.

 

How did that one turn out?

 

it didn't really happen, i just had nothing to say on topic so i went the parody thread route.

 

Always a good choice.

 

http://gobarbra.com/hit/new-8f97a01648b44b78d5c9addb0dbb8963